tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5164588272845310569.post8215803150719115739..comments2023-08-28T07:04:55.848-04:00Comments on The Poptart Manifesto by Rick Gualtieri: Ren Faire: A Tale from The Tome of Bill (Part 4 - Finale)Rick Ghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07703091917685458099noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5164588272845310569.post-56343736591481521722011-10-30T06:01:08.891-04:002011-10-30T06:01:08.891-04:00Hilarious! Got my vote as the best story from Rena...Hilarious! Got my vote as the best story from Renaissance.Book Republik Bloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13750567792923983476noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5164588272845310569.post-24335406762176809132011-10-28T16:16:51.338-04:002011-10-28T16:16:51.338-04:00David, Misha thanks!
Misha, this story itself is ...David, Misha thanks!<br /><br />Misha, this story itself is over (unless theres a Ren3 followup contest :). However the 3 characters Bill, Ed, and Tom are also from my book series.Rick Ghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07703091917685458099noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5164588272845310569.post-19217929771358837242011-10-28T15:07:12.681-04:002011-10-28T15:07:12.681-04:00Hahahaha loved this ending. Especially the guys in...Hahahaha loved this ending. Especially the guys in costume. ^_^ Does the story continue?Misha Gerrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06364173848456424521noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5164588272845310569.post-6160592238944191162011-10-27T17:56:22.811-04:002011-10-27T17:56:22.811-04:00The ending ... hilarious! The horror! And their co...The ending ... hilarious! The horror! And their conversation is great. Loved how you wrapped this all up. Thank you for sharing your writing! :)David P. Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17259276981865439853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5164588272845310569.post-89491376106674307612011-10-27T11:24:08.601-04:002011-10-27T11:24:08.601-04:00fun! "I told you this was the right place!&qu...fun! "I told you this was the right place!" and then the repeated line from the first week. :)<br /><br />Fun story, it read well.kellyhttp://kellywrites.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5164588272845310569.post-1456125262043941522011-10-27T10:56:19.245-04:002011-10-27T10:56:19.245-04:00Nick, Mary thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.Nick, Mary thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.Rick Ghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07703091917685458099noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5164588272845310569.post-50935911465164111672011-10-27T10:27:25.961-04:002011-10-27T10:27:25.961-04:00Great ending. :)Great ending. :)M Paxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14096697282530998519noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5164588272845310569.post-80928277380960653702011-10-26T15:35:15.873-04:002011-10-26T15:35:15.873-04:00Oh my God. That was the PERFECT ending. Loved it! ...Oh my God. That was the PERFECT ending. Loved it! xDAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11610184057896951494noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5164588272845310569.post-27621461372641815912011-10-26T12:28:18.435-04:002011-10-26T12:28:18.435-04:00Joshua, Roland thanks! I appreciate it. I actuall...Joshua, Roland thanks! I appreciate it. I actually have a full alternate ending (which I might post in a week or so) where I tried to play it out real-time. However, I had to toss it as there was just no way to do it in 600 words and actually end it properly. Was driving me nuts until I decided to do it this way. :)Rick Ghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07703091917685458099noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5164588272845310569.post-59391987530106034982011-10-26T12:18:33.934-04:002011-10-26T12:18:33.934-04:00Joshua is right. You picked the perfect tone to en...Joshua is right. You picked the perfect tone to end your story. My hero, Victor Standish, snickered at "Yeah, but it was a hot half of a face." RolandRoland D. Yeomanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5164588272845310569.post-86466345226768232912011-10-26T12:13:14.726-04:002011-10-26T12:13:14.726-04:00Dude, hysterical ending. I also liked how it was v...Dude, hysterical ending. I also liked how it was very low-key, just them talking about what had happened. Much faster that way. Nicely done. And so funny.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com